There were questions,
And the answers.
There were destinations,
And the paths.
There were labyrinths,
And the escape.
There were waves,
And the calm.
There were many more,
For sure.
But all I remember is Love,
Simple and pure.
It was deep,
And infinite as the skies.
O dear,
Why couldn't you understand my eyes.
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Feel free to crticize..... I know it's a very bad consequence of poetic induction.
Nevermind.
8 comments:
maybe coz cudnt stop admirin the beauty of your eyes to understand them.
@ Godiva
Wow....tht's a very nice comment as well as compliment (if u really meant it :P)
Bole to mast likhaa hai!! ab tere ko ranchi ke traffic waale thulle nahee pakdenge coz u have a poetic license..super Pj..hehe
~aby
@ Cardamom
thnk u thnk u :)
lekin agar ye hum ranchi k thulle ko sunaye naa.... to wo pakka andar kar dega :P
lekin...bole to tension nahin lene ka...apun k paas original license bhi hai.... ekdum jhakas waala :D
I had posted a comment...Wer is it? :-(
@ Bebo
Dunno.... waise bhi ur blog is unreachable for some days !!!
phir se kar dijiye... :D
I had changed the url. Actually was forced to for some reason. Its nomorenonsense. Hmmm...is that making you think "Oh! Thank god! Fianlly non stop nonsense is no more nonsense." Is it?
@ Bebo
arre.... aisa nahin hai.... I love your nonsense :P
BTW where's the comment that got lost. post kariye phir se..humko padhna hai :)
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